Ember, with quite hesitation, responds to Eartha," Back in my village I was having a magic battle, and sadly enough my opponent stole my wand. I saw him run to this train but can't seem to find him now." Ember began to look around again, hoping the settling of the people would resolve in seeing the man. She gazes onto a suspicious person backing into a corner of the train."Do you know who that is?" Ember asks Eartha softly.
"No worries. Hi, I'm Ember," Ember replied. "Hi, my name is Eartha. Nice to meet you." says Eartha. Eartha and Ember sat down together in the middle of the train. After sitting in awkward silence for a few minutes, Eartha began to ask Ember why she's heading to Elantris.
Haja, hood up and grumpy face, keeps to herself in the corner. Something about the encounter makes her smirk, but she quickly goes back to the distraction of some small pamphlet she's reading. She says nothing, and after a few moments, has drifted far into the back of car.
Ember steps onto the train briskly. She looks around frantically in hope of seeing the man with her wand. Ember has no sight of him so she makes her way to the back of the train. As she wanders back she bumps into a girl getting on."I'm sorry!" She exclaims.
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"I've never seen him before, does he look familiar?" asked Eartha.
Ember, with quite hesitation, responds to Eartha," Back in my village I was having a magic battle, and sadly enough my opponent stole my wand. I saw him run to this train but can't seem to find him now." Ember began to look around again, hoping the settling of the people would resolve in seeing the man. She gazes onto a suspicious person backing into a corner of the train."Do you know who that is?" Ember asks Eartha softly.
"No worries. Hi, I'm Ember," Ember replied. "Hi, my name is Eartha. Nice to meet you." says Eartha. Eartha and Ember sat down together in the middle of the train. After sitting in awkward silence for a few minutes, Eartha began to ask Ember why she's heading to Elantris.
Haja, hood up and grumpy face, keeps to herself in the corner. Something about the encounter makes her smirk, but she quickly goes back to the distraction of some small pamphlet she's reading. She says nothing, and after a few moments, has drifted far into the back of car.
Ember steps onto the train briskly. She looks around frantically in hope of seeing the man with her wand. Ember has no sight of him so she makes her way to the back of the train. As she wanders back she bumps into a girl getting on."I'm sorry!" She exclaims.